This is a very rough draft of the narrative. There is still a lot of editing still to do this was just to get feedback on what was good and what can be improved on.
Improvement's:
- Before music starts edit to the beat
- Remove shaky footage
- Might use layering (0:18)
- Use layering where one half of the screen is empty/out of focus
- Experiment with filters
- Don't have female protagonist on screen for to long, might ruin the immersion
- Experiment with having two of the same person on screen (eg 0:28 have him stand next to himself)
- Shot the drop through editing
- Intertextuality to Blair Witch Project at 0:23
- The singer is not glamorized and due to this audience can identify
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